What is happening now[in the story]?
I just saw Chris in taco bell on the way to the mall...
with "Luna". So Luna Pops out at the last minute and i had to say
"Luna" was my sister.He'll probally figure out i was lying.
What do you want to happen[in the story]?
I want Liam/Luna to stop using me,I am not
his slave.I know I'm the only person supporting him but
why only me.I bet there's someone out there who will help him more
than i can. I have my own life as well.
What do you predict will happen[in the story]?
That i hope finally Luna/Liam whatever he is now will
find someone to support him that in his position.
I know I'm the only person supporting him but
why only me?
Well done! Very creative and spot on with the character. Interesting interpretation of her emotions! Make sure you use proper punctuation!
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